Friday, August 29, 2008

My son's Poem

Recently Abdullah wrote a poem as part of his school project.

The poem is attached below:

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I believe that believing is a new sense,
more valuable but less recognizable,
like the heart of an oak flying into thin pieces of air,
or a hummingbird in a dead dull tree.
But once its found, it can do something that never before happened.

When you shine with the opposite color of emotion in the horizon.
flying with glee, but all sadness is what I see,
seeing the crashing pieces of woodchips transform to parchment,
can it be friendly as can be?

impacting people forenoon by forenoon,
and everytime the sky conceals.
This impact is not strong as steel,
but hard as a hammer slashing,

Until there is no end
But what is anything,
without an end.
what is this poem without an end,
here you might get lost,
this is not believing

because this is a sense that cant get you lost,
it can lead you to the very end,
either to a garden of peace,
or the blazing fire of fear,
that’s what you choose.

because believing is a sense not an impact.
A sense that connot be recognized,
like the heart of the oak dazzling across the sky,
or the hummingbird of a dead swaying tree.

9 comments:

void said...

চমৎকার কবিতটা...
শেষের চার লাইন অসাধারণ লাগলো!

আবদুল্লাহর জন্য অনেক অনেক শুভকামনা... :)

ত্রিভুজ said...

simply great... অসাধারণ ...

প্রথম দুই লাইন পড়ে তো চেয়ার থিকা পইরা গেছিলাম... ফিনিশিংটা সত্যিই অসাধারণ হইছে... জটিল!

eccentric_human said...
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eccentric_human said...

MashaAllah!

Nothing more to say...

Words are simply stuck!!!

Anonymous said...

Abdullah zindabad ;-))))
hehehe..

দারুন কবিতা :)

umm_abdullah said...

শূন্য মেয়ে, ত্রিভুজ, বিবেক আর eccentric_human

আপনাদের সাপোর্টের জন্য ধন্যবাদ

যাযাবর said...

ওর অনুভূতিগুলো স্পর্শকাতর, দারুন লাগলো কবিতাটা।

umm_abdullah said...

Thanks for reading @jajabor

Neo said...

দারুন কবিতা, আব্দুল্লাহকে ইয়ুথওয়েভে লিখতে বলুন।
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